Magazine advert; Audience feedback

After completing the first draft of my magazine advert, I asked some of my peers and others their opinion on the first draft of my magazine advert. I collected this through the use of an interview type method in which I asked different people, one to one what they liked about the advert, and what could be improved. I then put these comments into a table as they were talking.


Screenshot of the first draft shown to the members giving feedback.


Table of feedback given




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